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How do you explain your wounded wings, O Icarus?
How do you explain the shadows bred by your footfalls
and the wheels of night that turn over forests of stone saplings;
how do you explain the way your heartbeats plummet head-first toward the sea
and make themselves into prayers caught in circles of endless light?
You showed me the ocean-forged fire
that razed down the seraphim and their halos and seared the spectres
kneeling over your graveside with God's words
stitched on their dirtied feet. You showed me memories
of heaven filled with shapeless dreamers that raised lovers from
the soot and ashes like snowfalls drifting past white sycamore trees
while the empty sun spun and spun around a place
you had never known or seen before and the sky, the sky-
it was not there.
You remembered a sun without a sky.
(Let me tell you, Icarus- this is why you fell.)
And after the revolution of ten thousand stars
a young boy will dig up your aching bones
from where they set sail through visions of dead constellations and
shipwrecked alongside forgotten promises and confessions
at the feet of rising titans
to find layers of sea-salted sunshine wax in place of marrow.
He will take rain-trodden moon sand and the crests of recycled ocean waves
to scrape away the skin clinging your ribcage
and with a hammer and a heartstring carve into its side
the secrets that his father taught him
while they sat beneath the sky and watched it fold in on itself
as thunder pooled and echoed beneath their tongues-
secrets that he once swallowed like quiet revelations
when he, too, was a child dreaming of
pale wings and flying and
the sun.
How do you explain the shadows bred by your footfalls
and the wheels of night that turn over forests of stone saplings;
how do you explain the way your heartbeats plummet head-first toward the sea
and make themselves into prayers caught in circles of endless light?
You showed me the ocean-forged fire
that razed down the seraphim and their halos and seared the spectres
kneeling over your graveside with God's words
stitched on their dirtied feet. You showed me memories
of heaven filled with shapeless dreamers that raised lovers from
the soot and ashes like snowfalls drifting past white sycamore trees
while the empty sun spun and spun around a place
you had never known or seen before and the sky, the sky-
it was not there.
You remembered a sun without a sky.
(Let me tell you, Icarus- this is why you fell.)
And after the revolution of ten thousand stars
a young boy will dig up your aching bones
from where they set sail through visions of dead constellations and
shipwrecked alongside forgotten promises and confessions
at the feet of rising titans
to find layers of sea-salted sunshine wax in place of marrow.
He will take rain-trodden moon sand and the crests of recycled ocean waves
to scrape away the skin clinging your ribcage
and with a hammer and a heartstring carve into its side
the secrets that his father taught him
while they sat beneath the sky and watched it fold in on itself
as thunder pooled and echoed beneath their tongues-
secrets that he once swallowed like quiet revelations
when he, too, was a child dreaming of
pale wings and flying and
the sun.
Literature
Largesse
Imagine spraying the donation box grey,
Making it a gravestone and
Bow as if to pray;
But instead inscribe "He gave generously"
On the face of Paternoster square.
Remember to strip the cube clean,
Don your human skin
And bring our carrion
Luggage to be picked apart upon arrival.
The crows would like us to queue at gate nine,
And fill our pockets with cash,
Diplomatic immunity works well, so
We'll be patient until we crash.
The Empire of the Crow is a devious place,
So please remember, Sir, to keep
Antebellum in mind, we can't maintain this pace.
Literature
As if we were sunflowers.
It was the most beautiful setting sun of my life.
The lights, the colors,
the fire, the clouds.
Where did everyone go?
I could swear they were all over there.
Walking, working, dating,
having a good time.
Am I dreaming and I don't know?
Every that I loved,
Every that I hated,
Every that I did not know,
Where did everyone go?
Where? I keep wondering.
Where? As if I didn't already know the answer.
Where? I should really leave this place, but.
Where? Where should I go?
I run away just to maybe forget all of them.
I begin to scream and scream just to maybe destroy everything.
I'm freaking out and it's easy to see.
I'm losing my
Literature
Eternal Flame
Thoughts of you flutter
like wind igniting embers
of dreams that wont die
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I actually finished this piece a week or so before the last poem I posted, but I never got around to putting it up. It feels incomplete, for some reason. Like something's missing.
Side note: Icarus is one of my favorite myths.
For theWrittenRevolution:
- Does the transition between the first half and second half feel smooth?
- Is the imagery effective?
- Is the opening stanza strong enough to support the rest of the poem?
Edit: A DLD? Oh geez, I didn't see that coming, but that's awesome. I love all of you.
Side note: Icarus is one of my favorite myths.
For theWrittenRevolution:
- Does the transition between the first half and second half feel smooth?
- Is the imagery effective?
- Is the opening stanza strong enough to support the rest of the poem?
Edit: A DLD? Oh geez, I didn't see that coming, but that's awesome. I love all of you.
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I love all the imagery at the end and how you separated "the sun"
It built up so wonderfully.
It built up so wonderfully.